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Transonicle, the first part of a series of 3 installments, is a comedy written by

ManiacToaLaco. The story itself is a spoof of the 2007 Transformers film by Micheal Bay, with alterations to make it "funnier" and more child friendly. There are several guest stars in the comedy, of which most are the Autotoabots. The story is about the battle of the Autotoabots, led by Matanui Prime, and the Deceptikuta, led by Makutatron, trying to capture the AllShiny, the key to the survival of their race.

Plot Overview

The story starts with a breif narration from Matanui Prime, who is not named at the time. It continues onto Captain Ithinkimbald, who is in Ko-Wahi with a ship and crew who are stuck. After chassing some ski-ussals, Ithinkimbald falls though the ice and finds the body of Makutatron, which he does not know at the time. It then goes to the present day, were Hewkii and his team of soliders are returning to a SOCKS military base. At the base, Hewkii is making a call to his wife, Macku, when a helicopter lands, transforms and attacks the base. Hewkii and his team leave the base, which is destroyed.

The story goes onto Jaller, who is in his class-room in Ga-Metru, doing a presentation infront of the class. Jaller presuades the Teacher to give him an A- minus, on which Jaller then tells his dad, and the two go to a used car-lot to buy a car for Jaller. At the car lot, Jaller finds a car he likes, an old beat up yellow camaro, which, as it turns out, Jaller and his father are one widget short from owing. The car lot owner, Bobby Ahkmou, tells them they cannot take the car. A high pitched noise in the car lot destroys the windows on al the other cars, and Bobby Ahkmou let's them take the car.

Back in the desert, Hewkii and his Team have made it to an old village, and they attempt to use a phone for help, when a robot scorpion attacks, killing one of Hewkii's men and hurting several more. They manage to call in an air strike, which makes the robot run away. Hewkii and his men are air lifted out of the area.

In Metru-Nui, Jaller has gone to the park with his friend Takua. The two witness a fight between Hahli and her boyfriend, Nuhrii. While Takua climbs a tree, Jaller takes his car and picks her up and drives her home.

Meanwhile, still in Metru-Nui, Nixe, a Ga-Matoran on her way to a job interview, is caught by Onu-Matoran, who give her a free watch. Later, in her apartment, she tells us that the interview didn't even manage to happen. Suddenly, Onu and Po-Matoran burst into her room and take her away. They take her to the colesieum, where Seceratary of Defense Turaga Vakama is telling a crowd of people something about hackers.

Aboard Turaga Dume's Plane, Air Plane One, the Deceptikuta Frendox transmocs and begins searching the plane. After some Mission Impossible esque moves, he finds a computer and downloads the information Blacktaka had failed to recheive at the military base. Before he is done, he puts a virus into the computer system. As Air Plane One lands, he exits and gets into the Deceptikuta Police car Barritax, who drives off in search of Jaller, who has the "artifact".

Back in the coliseum, Nixie and her friend Nuparu, along with several other techies, are searching through files to find out what the Deceptikuta Blacktaka had been looking for. She finds it, when suddenly Frendox unleases a computer virus from Air Plane One, and all the computer's crash.

Running Gags

Transonicle features a few running gags that continue onto Transonicle 2: Revenge of Icarax.

The thud: The Thud is a "charactor" who shows up whenever someone hits the ground with a "thud". The Thud will then get up and walk away, hoping not to be crushed again, which it enevitably does.
IcyToa1: Icytoa1 is actually a guest star Matoran who shows up once and a while, points out theres robots fighting, and is subsequently crushed by the robots. He is a teacher, and then a news castor in Transonicle 2; however, he does not get crushed in it.
People explaining exactly what just happend to Jaller: This is probably the least featured gag. Jaller will usually have something happen to him, and someone who wasn't (usually) there will know exactly what happend.
The fourth wall: Charactors will willingly break the fourth wall, and acknowledge it.

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 [[File:Placeholder|right|300px]] Transonicle, the first part of a series of 3 installments, is a comedy written by
-[[ManiacToaLaco]]. The story itself is a spoof of the 2007 Transformers film by Micheal Bay, with alterations to make it "funnier" and more child friendly. There are several guest stars in the comedy, of which most are the Autotoabots. The story is about the battle of the Autotoabots, led by Matanui Prime, and the Deceptikuta, led by Makutatron, trying to capture the AllShiny, the key to the survival of their race.
+[[ManiacToaLaco]]. The story itself is a spoof of the 2007 Transformers film by Micheal Bay, with alterations to make it "funnier" and more child friendly. There are several guest stars in the comedy, of which most are the Autotoabots. The story is about the battle of the Autotoabots, led by [[Matanui Prime]], and the Deceptikuta, led by Makutatron, trying to capture the AllShiny, the key to the survival of their race.
 ==Plot Overview==
-The story starts with a breif narration from Matanui Prime, who is not named at the time. It continues onto Captain Ithinkimbald, who is in Ko-Wahi with a ship and crew who are stuck. After chassing some ski-ussals, Ithinkimbald falls though the ice and finds the body of Makutatron, which he does not know at the time. It then goes to the present day, were Hewkii and his team of soliders are returning to a SOCKS military base. At the base, Hewkii is making a call to his wife, Macku, when a helicopter lands, transforms and attacks the base. Hewkii and his team leave the base, which is destroyed.
+The story starts with a breif narration from [[Matanui Prime]], who is not named at the time. It continues onto Captain Ithinkimbald, who is in Ko-Wahi with a ship and crew who are stuck. After chassing some ski-ussals, Ithinkimbald falls though the ice and finds the body of Makutatron, which he does not know at the time. It then goes to the present day, were Hewkii and his team of soliders are returning to a SOCKS military base. At the base, Hewkii is making a call to his wife, Macku, when a helicopter lands, transforms and attacks the base. Hewkii and his team leave the base, which is destroyed.