Replacing Vultraz's Diner
When ending the original Vultraz's Diner, Ibrow had no intention of ever returning to the diner. Vultraz was going to go on a journey to find Brutaka (which was supposed to happen in Vultraz's Journey), and then travel through different dimensions to find other Vultrazs. Then, he'd take over the world, and things would happen from there. However, Ibrow knew that he'd ignored Vultraz's Diner too much, which contributed to its failure. He also knew that the comedy had been slowly becoming less funny than before, because Ibrow was posting chapters to just move the story along. While writing Vultraz's Journey, Ibrow discovered the same thing beginning to happen, and stopped writing the comedy altogether. He promised himself to never write a comedy again, since he had failed to write a comedy that could actually be fun to read so many times. However, when Comedies Contest #4 came along Ibrow couldn't resist the urge to write comedy that blew up inside of him, and he entered. Despite doing poorly, Ibrow then decided to revisit the diner and write about it again, only this time vowing to pay the comedy the attention that it needed. While writing the first chapter, Ibrow edited the chapter writing style, placing different chapters into mini-story arcs withing the comedy. It worked; Chapters 1-3, despite taking place in the exact same spot, were better than the entire original Vultraz's Diner combined. Chapters 4-6 saw the return of Vultraz's Diner antagonist Mazeka, while introducing new villains: Hero Factory. Chapters 7-8, although a short arc, still maintained the humour of the previous chapters. Then, Chapter 9 began an all-out war for the diner, between Vultraz, Mazeka, Hero Factory, and an unexpected villain: Vezon, turned into a monster of drool. So far, Ibrow has doner everything he said he'd do; and he plans to continue.
The Story
Chapters 1-3 : The Key Trilogy
Chapters 4-6: Mazeka Problems
Chapters 7-8: Hero Factory
Chapters 9-12: Wars of the Diner
Chapters 13-???: Medieval Times
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The Characters
Main/Major Characters
Vultraz - Owner of the diner that lives upstairs. Is slightly on the insane side. Is supposed to be the main character. Appears in Chapter: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11,12
Vezon - A formerly insane skakdi that was temporarily turned into a monster of drool. Upon returning to normal, he has turned sane. Appears in Chapter: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12
Jaller - A cowardly matoran who works for Vultraz, and is freaked out especially by the now-sane Vezon. Appears in Chapter: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12
Ibrow - Known to go around disguised as a turaga. Appears in Chapter: 1, 2, 5, 6, 7, 10, 11, 12
Bitil - Vultraz's most loyal (but sometimes boring) employee. Currently getting out of the sea. Appears in Chapter: 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11
Mazeka - Vultraz's longtime rival, who wants the diner. Appears in Chapter: 4, 5, 6, 9, 10, 11, 12
Icarax - Bitil's rival in pokemon. Appears in Chapter: 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12
Kopeke - A ko-matoran who's rivals with Jaller to be Vultraz's left-hand man. Appears in Chapter: 9, 10, 11
Side Characters
Mutran - A forgetful makuta in Mazeka's gang. Appears in Chapter: 4, 10
Onepu - An onu-matoran who for some reason hates Jaller. Appears in Chapter: 4, 5
Vezok - A former piraka who works in Mazeka's gang. Hates Vezon. Appears in Chapter: 4,5 Toastie Makers - A powerful group of mysterious beings feared even by Ibrow. Only Jalina isn't afraid of them. Appears in Chapter: 12
Guest Stars
Kapurkar - A mostly sane but oddly coloured toa who likes to spout nonsense at people. Appears in Chapter: 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12
Karl - A notsosane toa who enjoys launching nuclear bombs that works for Vultraz. Appears in Chapter: 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12
Jalina - The first guest star not to have a name beginning with 'K'. Also Kapurkar's older sister, who drives him insane. The only character not scared of the Toastie Makers. Appears in Chapter: 11, 12
Hero Factory
Preston Stormer - Preston Stormer -Leader of the Hero Factory invasion. Appears in Chapter: 6, 7, 8, 10, 11, 12
Duncan Bulk - Second in command of the Hero Factory invasion, who was blasted into Space. Appears in Chapter: 6, 7, 8, 10
Von Nebula - An all-black hulking robot who scares Jaller silly. Appears in Chapter: 7, 8, 10, 11, 12
Mark Surge - A bright electric blue Hero Factory robot who enjoys bragging, but is skilled in single combat. Was blasted into Space. Appears in Chapter: 7, 8, 10
Xplode - A bright red and black robot who has a literally explosive temper. Appears in Chapter: 10, 11, 12
Vapour - A blue and black robot who serves as Von Nebula's right hand man. Appears in Chapter: 10, 11, 12
Corroder - A lime green and black robot who is spit rivals with Vezon. Appears in Chapter: 10, 11, 12
Jimi Stringer - An orange and black robot who now leads most of the remaining Hero Factory members alive. Rivals with Preston Stormer to lead Hero Factory. Appears in Chapter: 11