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==Replacing Vultraz's Diner== |
==Replacing Vultraz's Diner== |
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| β | When ending the original Vultraz's Diner, Ibrow had no intention of ever returning to the diner. Vultraz was going to go on a journey to find Brutaka (which was supposed to happen in Vultraz's Journey), and then travel through different dimensions to find other Vultrazs. Then, he'd take over the world, and things would happen from there. However, Ibrow knew that he'd ignored Vultraz's Diner too much, which contributed to its failure. He also knew that the comedy had been slowly becoming less funny than before, because Ibrow was posting chapters to just move the story along. While writing Vultraz's Journey, Ibrow discovered the same thing beginning to happen, and stopped writing the comedy altogether. He promised himself to never write a comedy again, since he had failed to write a comedy that could actually be fun to read so many times. However, when Comedies Contest #4 came along Ibrow couldn't resist the urge to write comedy that blew up inside of him, and he entered. Despite doing poorly, Ibrow then decided to revisit the diner and write about it again, only this time vowing to pay the comedy the attention that it needed. While writing the first chapter, Ibrow edited the chapter writing style, placing different chapters into mini-story arcs withing the comedy. It worked; Chapters 1-3, despite taking place in the exact same spot, were better than the entire original Vultraz's Diner combined. Chapters 4-6 saw the return of Vultraz's Diner antagonist Mazeka, while introducing new villains: Hero Factory. Chapters 7-8, although a short arc, still maintained the humour of the previous chapters. Then, Chapter 9 began an all-out war for the diner, between Vultraz, Mazeka, Hero Factory, and an unexpected villain: Vezon, turned into a monster of drool. |
+ | When ending the original Vultraz's Diner, Ibrow had no intention of ever returning to the diner. Vultraz was going to go on a journey to find Brutaka (which was supposed to happen in Vultraz's Journey), and then travel through different dimensions to find other Vultrazs. Then, he'd take over the world, and things would happen from there. However, Ibrow knew that he'd ignored Vultraz's Diner too much, which contributed to its failure. He also knew that the comedy had been slowly becoming less funny than before, because Ibrow was posting chapters to just move the story along. While writing Vultraz's Journey, Ibrow discovered the same thing beginning to happen, and stopped writing the comedy altogether. He promised himself to never write a comedy again, since he had failed to write a comedy that could actually be fun to read so many times. However, when Comedies Contest #4 came along Ibrow couldn't resist the urge to write comedy that blew up inside of him, and he entered. Despite doing poorly, Ibrow then decided to revisit the diner and write about it again, only this time vowing to pay the comedy the attention that it needed. While writing the first chapter, Ibrow edited the chapter writing style, placing different chapters into mini-story arcs withing the comedy. It worked; Chapters 1-3, despite taking place in the exact same spot, were better than the entire original Vultraz's Diner combined. Chapters 4-6 saw the return of Vultraz's Diner antagonist Mazeka, while introducing new villains: Hero Factory. Chapters 7-8, although a short arc, still maintained the humour of the previous chapters. Then, Chapter 9 began an all-out war for the diner, between Vultraz, Mazeka, Hero Factory, and an unexpected villain: Vezon, turned into a monster of drool. So far, Ibrow has doner everything he said he'd do; and he plans to continue. |
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==The Story== |
==The Story== |
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